Treading Water
Treading Water
In the riptide of life
Ultimately there is no one to save us
Some strive to reach us
But their bodies tire
As they fight the currents
Of life’s demands
We swim or drown
In accord with courage determination
And circumstance
Salt sour on the tongue
Often struggling
With a thirst unquenchable
Seductive seas
Ebb stealthily
While we thrash and curse
Tempted to roll and float
Yet unwilling
To succumb to the flow
Longing
For loves lost life jacket
As we come to accept
Some days
The best we can do
Is tread water
Tricia Bertram 10/2012
Posted on October 11, 2012, in Poems and tagged circmumstance, courage, curse, determination, drown, float, life's demands, loves lost, swim, thrash, tread water. Bookmark the permalink. 4 Comments.
I hope you don’t spend all of your time ‘Treading water’ I hope spend time, most of your time, swimming with strength and vigour. As is the right of all of us.
I hope you are well.
Joe
Thanks so much Joe. Life’s a mixed bag at present, some days swimming, some days treading water. My health is slowly improving.
Take care
T.
This has a very different tone from the ones you’ve more recently posted. It’s like climbing out of the depths of the pain in your loss and recognizing the success of treading water! I’ve said before to grieving friends that I admired them for every day they could just get out of bed. That was enough! I felt that in this poem, Tricia, and very much appreciated it! oxo
Thanks Debra for your empathetic comments.
Take care
Tricia